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| white-clouds 2005-12-18 ch 1,   | That's what I wonder all the time. Brilliant piece. |
| MorsRutilus 2005-11-28 ch 1, | Reminds me of Phantom of the Opera... I empathize... |
| LilLaTLuv 2005-10-29 ch 1, | Hey! Very good! AND you even rhymed! I love this! It's very true. I've felt this way, too. Just stick to it. You'll get through. Peace is a hard goal. I don´t really know anyone who has reached it, myself. But, good luck! Luv ya,Tashi :) P.S. Where have you been lately? I haven't heard from you at all. Did you just lose interest in my poetry :( . I'm sorry. Well, I hope you feel better soon! |
| xDistortedReALiTyx 2005-10-29 ch 1, | *Cheers* Awsomeness!! I love it, I'm asking the same questions...Keep it up ^_^--pammy-ps- come bac? ^_^ |
| Yami Shizuka 2005-10-18 ch 1, | Such a powerful piece yet you kept it short and simple. Beautiful. ~Yami~ |
| Faithless Juliet 2005-10-18 ch 1, | Well done; I liked the line about God, I havn't seen you in a while, its good to read work from you again, keep up the good work. Much love,Juliet. |
| East-0f-Eden 2005-10-18 ch 1, | i think we all feel this way and i feel it alot too. Especially lately (don't ask). But, perhaps it's God's way. It's not a perfect world and I suppose~ no one promised a rose garden. If it was a perfect world we all would live in sunny Italy with a red sports car and be married to Orlando Bloom (alright that's probably just me. but you get the point) Gold becomes pure in fire. You will make a fine gold someday. just take it day by day and make peace with the deamons. ~much love~East of Eden |