Very Nicely written, sounds like me to a point...Keep it up.

A good piece of work, I see you didn't have to rhyme in order to achieve a balance in your poem. It's ironic somewhat, I write rhyming poems but I prefer poems like these without rhymes.

Anyway I like this. Good work.

- ShadowEver

Love it. Good descriptions. Good metaphors.

Damn, where've you been? Anyway, good comeback. It paints an awesome picture, and even deeper concept. Awesome...

hey i lov this poem! i can relate to that a lot.

sophii