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withprettysmiles 2005-11-27 ch 1,	You always have wicked good endings to your poems! woot ...I love it, it's flows together wonderful :)
flaming.footprints 2005-10-23 ch 1,	Love it. It's inspiring Anna. Great job on this ~Shavo
Midnight In Eden 2005-10-21 ch 1,	There's no such thing as nothing... i love that because its so true (yes i love it, meh) and you aren't untalented. This proves it, you can write with nothing and make something. .:midnight:.
queenofthbritons 2005-10-20 ch 1,	yep yep yep. I feel the same way. you put it into a lovely black and white though
account not in use 2005-10-19 ch 1,	You have me trapped beneath your words. Wonderful writing.
J. N. Laerasyn 2005-10-18 ch 1,	That was beautifully written. I'm not sure, but I think I've felt that too. I could tell you that you shouldn't feel untalented because you are very talented, but everyone says that and you probably wouldn't listen to me anyway, so I'll just say keep trying. :-)
nothing but treble 2005-10-18 ch 1,	don't feel that way, i liked it. the word choice makes it different, in a Janet Fitch meets Walt Whitman kind of way. i don't know WHY it makes me think of someone hiding in an attic above a roaring party, but it does.
DrownASiren 2005-10-18 ch 1,	Your writing is very deep and I like the way that you put the questions of "what?" and "nothing?" in this poem. It gives a feeling that no one is answering, and I think you acheived exactly what you were aiming for. Good stuff.