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Reviews For: After the Crusade

calcula
2005-10-23
ch 1,
The thing that kept bothering me throughout this story was Phillipe's French accent. I am quite willing to believe that Richard and Phillipe's accents, even perhaps dialects, were different, but they were both native French speakers.
Kittimarlowe
2005-10-21
ch 1,
that was entertaining, well portrayed relationship. i liked how richard seemed to oscillate between angry at philippe and happy to see him. good.

i notice a thing about your writing--very spare, but details where they matter. a last word; were they 'openly displaying their affections' in front of that guard?

kit
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