Hey!

Please update this soon, as this one is my favorite. I think I've reviewed everything now, and I can't wait to read more. Anyhoo, once again, update soon!

Sillygoose49

Hey!

No, the chapter wasn't choppy, it flowed nicely. I liked how you use languages to add to your story (like the Celtic). Anyhoo, I think I have another chapter to read.

Sillygoose49

Wow. You got me hooked. On to the next chapter.

i really enjoy your story

plz update soon and consider me a permanent reader and reviewer.

i wish u luck on ur writing

hey girl, great update! i'm not sure about the whole bath scene but good chapter! the characters are alive in thier own way and amaze me! hope to hear from you soon, can't wait to read more of Wicked and Pure-anime freakizoid X^_^X

hey, great story so far! i really like Kilahya's character the best, she seems like a really interesting person. I really like the direction in which this story's going, i'll be waiting for an update!!

yes! expecting and finding nothing short of it! please continue.

I am so glad to see that you are writing again, I have missed reading your stories. This is a very promising beginning, and you have most certainly tweeked my interest. Great work, and please update soon!

Sillygoose

PS: I've update the sequel for Mikona, if you would like to check it out!

hey girl, whaz up? great story, glad you're inspiration is back! ^_^ can't wait for the next update, great job once again!-anime freakizoid X^_^X

I really like this. It's original as far as I've read. I don't know if you're French or not, but J'aime votre conte.

Not a bad start; I like the voice you're developing here. My one suggestions are that 1) you take a more active voice, and 2) (on a related note) that a little adverb goes a long way. Sometimes leaving out the "ly" word will make your work more powerful.