Really breathtakingly beautiful. I really liked this poem. It had such a wondrous, air about it and I loved your choice of words especially these ones as openers: 'The parting of eternity, in a dream

The misty dawn sends off a chariot of light

Upon fading clouds and sunlight’s stream

Off into the far distances, out of sight'They set a dreamy wonderful mood, I imagined, chariots riding through clouds, led by winged horses. That is such a beautiful image so thank you, for creating it. You are going on my favorites.

Sincerely,

the Stranger in the moonlight.

wow! That was so emotional and sad!

Beautiful imagery. And it made me feel kind of...lost - Nice effects!

Nice job once again. I really like your work.-Kelly I

man, that's cool imagery! well done! so well done! that's so very very cool. love it :)

WOAH. OMG. *adds to favorites list* is was INCREDIBLE. I have nothing to say. I'm utterly speechless.

Wow. That was great. I love the detail and wording in your poems. They're always so deep and simply beautiful. This one was a perfect example. Keep writing!

i really like that last line.. great poem

Existence wandering this broken world

words... simple, short, effective... do you know kamikaze899? she's really good like you... n_n check out her poems if you have time. she's in my fave authors list for shortcut. nyehehehehe.

This is pretty good. It flows nice and the rhyme helped it along. Nice imagery.

wow! i could really see this as a published work!

ring of prophecy. word choice fits exactly. lovely. ;)

This is pretty and melodic.

A very beautiful poem yourself. Great great work.

Wow, that's really wonderful! It truly painted a picture in my head!