oh, it such a sad, distant touch to it. something the reader will never be able to catch. Nice job though, and keep up the great work!

Go You...i no i can relate to this..and the last lines summed it all up brilliantly, this was just really good, short, but simple and sweet^_^ Well done^_^

A little sad one...Indeed it is.But well, it seems you excel in that sort...Gomen, It's not all that you write of course...Anyway, Sad but Nice