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Reviews For: The Heart of A Mind: Poetry Anthology
the mighty lu bu 2007-05-07 . chapter 1
i like the poem, very nice.
Silver Carnation 2006-05-27 . chapter 50
I feel like I can relate...but I also feel that I can't...its an oxymoron sort of thing...complex. I think that the way I feel I relate to it is different from its actual meaning...I know, I'm oddly complex.
Silver Carnation 2006-05-27 . chapter 51
I love this...I feel inspired after reading it...it givews me so many ideas for a new painting...I might work on one..

You are a lovely poet and deserve more attention...When I get my website up, I'm going to ask if I can add some of your poems to the "Other Authors" page of it.
Silver Carnation 2006-05-03 . chapter 49
I don't really understand this one..
Silver Carnation 2006-02-27 . chapter 40
Wow, A'serene...this is my favorite poem of yours as of now...very beautiful, reading it, I can picture an angel in darkness trying hard to protect a small, flickering, candle light with her hands from an unseen breeze...beautiful..
Silver Carnation 2006-02-10 . chapter 38
Beautiful poem...I can kind of relate a little bit to it...
Silver Carnation 2006-02-05 . chapter 37
This is my favorite of your poems...This is absolutely beautiful.
Silver Carnation 2005-12-02 . chapter 30
Beautiful poems Alyson...Is there something wrong? Please e-mail me...And I'm not talking about replying to my e-mails...I mean a new e-mail
SilverCarnation 2005-10-20 . chapter 1
I'm too lazy to login, so I just typed my username...Anyway, I like how you convey emotion in your poems. If these are supposed to tell us how you feel, it is a shame you are so sad, it seems you feel this way most of the time...Anyway, i think hese are written wonderful and if anyone feels the need to complain they should shut it or give you tips on improveing...honestly...people...
Devidedistand 2005-10-19 . chapter 2
I don't like the hairy star poem. No no no, it's good at the beginning but then at the end you talk about how the star itself is beautiful. I thought you were trying to say the hairy person was beautiful and serene and happy and such, eh?
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