Very nice! This poem is sweet, it captures such a tender emotion well. Only thing I would say is to be careful with your use of color descriptions. The poem is titled Chocolate Eyes, and you indeed mention "her perfect chocolate eyes", but the very next line you call them "glittering black". I would say that this would be fine, except for the fact that the two descriptions are immediately after one another. I don't know, if that's how you see her eyes, then I guess it's ok. I just thought I'd mention it. Hope you take this as me simply trying to be helpful, because overall I really love the poem.

... That was so beautiful :-). Your poetry is so amazing Adam... you're amazing. I love you so so much. Wonderful poem. Keep writing my love!

Wonderful work; I loved that tittle, its so sexual yet so adorable at the same time. Keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.