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| piuk 2008-01-01 ch 1,  | abuseOh my god, the last paragraph is amazing. I love it! |
| Hooray! 2005-12-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseYou are right, the moon is truly beautiful. During a full moon night, I love going outside to just look at it and the stars. I hate living close to the city, though. I live on a quiet street, but downtown is really close to where I live! Well, here I am rambling. Onto the review! This is one of my favorite poems. I like the way you describe the moon as something different in each stanza. I imagined the moon as you described it and I couldn't help, but smile. |
| kayla-lilya 2005-10-20 ch 1, anon. | abusewow! that was really beatuiful! is that how you really feel? you are right, the moon is a very strong and beatiful thing. |
| mizu no kokoro 2005-10-19 ch 1, | abusepretty~ the moon, truly inspirational~ good work! keep writing! |