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| Reviews for playground dreams |
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   Tikklz 10/27/05 . chapter 1Really original. I LOVED IT! |
| mizu no kokoro 10/23/05 . chapter 1 it touched the heart... so lonely, but not gone, not yet good work keep writing! |
| Spiral Artist 10/20/05 . chapter 1 There is something very intimate about this one, not to mention inquisitive, and yet, somehow, crystal clear vision is what forged this one. |
| account not in use 10/19/05 . chapter 1 wonderful. the feeling is clear, and the content is blinding. |
| she's not breathing 10/19/05 . chapter 1 aw that's lovely. i love how you break the lines into a pattern with the "To/ See,/" and the "Save/ Me/" etc. and the parts you have in parentheses - brilliant. and the opening line is really powerful. really nice job with this poem - the feeling leeks through the lines, i swear it does. k8 |
