yeah iambic pentameter. ick. i hate iambic pentameter. i know it can be a huge pain to write, so i really congratulate you on writing it. using a warrior - i think my head is just locked in this one link to video games and it won't get out of it - was cool because even though i'm thinking videogame repeatedly i can still see the link to everyday life, to how this poem could be talking to anyone, not just a warrior. nice work =)

~k8

Deep, and well-detailed; I loved it, keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.