another iambic pentameter. you always write in iambic pentameter? (please say no.) this was a great poem. i loved the last line, loved how it spoke directly to the reader as the "child" and the term didn't chaff at all. or i could just like the entire idea of sleeping and not waking up because reality is too cruel. really nice. i'll always like that kind of theme, no matter how clichéd it gets. =) do me a favour and check out something i've written?

~k8