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Reviews For: Amongst the Elements

hollister
2006-08-14
ch 1,
abuseThey haven't even met yet and already you want to stop the story! What's up with that? I love the summary, I love everything it has to offer. I know it probably seems like no one else is interested but PLEASE update, if not for anyone else but me!! Please, I'd really like to see where this story could go.
lizzy101
2005-11-11
ch 1,
abusehey great idea and story you need to update...email me at lizzy101@paris.com cause i have alot of ideas for you since im somalian that you might be interested in. or email me at greenart56@hotmail.com...you really should continue with this story and update like today!
BedazzledH20
2005-10-24
ch 1,
abuseI can just imagine Demicles being some gorgeous guy with a nice tan on his body and muscles that come from the hard work of sailing. I can even picture him wearing his shirt open a lot of the time with nice hair flowing freely. OOH! He is so sexy! Haha, anyway I like the way the tone is and on my next post I'm going to tell people to come check you out. I am ready for the next update and thanks on the heads up. As for writer's block, we all suffer from it (and trust, if you don't get over it now, you probably will later or realize that the story wasn't meant to be) so don't beat yourself up over it. *Necah*
Ysabrylla Noakes
2005-10-22
ch 1,
abuse0.0Holy crap. This is so freaking goodI'm in shockAnd totally intrigued. It makes me want to go write- you're such an inspiration. ^_^Keep it up! And if you ever need any help or want me to beta read or edit or whatever, don't be afraid to ask!
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