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| hanfiddle 2006-08-23 ch 1,  | abuseBravo. |
| dustytiger 2006-07-28 ch 1, | abuselove it! i really like how you write, it's different from a lot of ppl on here, it stands out, keep up the good work, as always thanx for sharing, and the review |
| Safira 2006-07-25 ch 1, | abuseA beautiful piece composed of vivid imagery and undertones of whimsicality. Loved the ending line, envoking a great contrast of light and darkness. Autumn. |
| How-Big-Is-Your-Violin 2006-07-21 ch 1, | abuseWow...that's nice |
| sleeping Pisces 2006-07-19 ch 1, | abuseFormat is interesting. I like the rhyme at the end, it really made this poem come alive. |
| Manna Banana 2006-07-17 ch 1, | abuseI really like this. In few words it conveys alot. |
| Lounalune 2006-07-17 ch 1, | abuseI love the rythm of that one. |
| lostfish 2006-07-14 ch 1, | abuseI'll have to admit, I don't understand this. But sometimes poetry isn't meant to be understood, just appreciated. So I want you to know that I appreciate your talent for stringing together words to make them sound rhythmic. There's just something about this poem- is there a formal structure for it? Any who, its very nice. I like it. |
| Saint Mo Kai 2006-07-14 ch 1, | abuseWow...this could have many meanings for me...it's very mysterious and leaves a lot to the imagination (a good thing in my opinion). In response to your review for my poem (Die Faster), I'm currently praying and thinking deeply about my feelings towards my father. Having lost my mother a few years ago, I have learned not to take parents for granted. It's hard to work around my anger at the moment, and that poem was written literally just an hour after I found out what happened. Sorry, this has turned more into a reply than a review...seriously though, this is a beautiful piece of work, you have a unique style which would be every author's pride and joy. |
| hateandkill-D 2006-07-13 ch 1, | abuseCool. |
| Penelope June 2006-04-04 ch 1, | abuseIt's an awesome poem... most people can pull off a hint of happiness in their poetry, but you did it (or at least i took it that way) quite nicely great job! |
| Bong2 2006-03-21 ch 1, | abuseShort, Sweet, & Rich with Meaning. Keep Writing! ~B.Rosser |
| waitandhope 2006-02-19 ch 1, | abuseOddly formatted, but impressive! |
| Susie Mango 2006-02-17 ch 1, | abusean odd format but it works |
| pyraverne 2006-02-16 ch 1, | abuseSorry.. finally catching up with my reviewers... ^^ what a wonderfully crafted representation of summer. i LOVE it, (well it helps that I was born in summer ^^) Thanks much for the review, I understand being busy ^^ but keep coming back, none of my poemz are long... -Pyra |