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| ive-got-sunshine 2006-09-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseyou've got me on the verge of tears because it's like someone else is describing me better than i can describe myself. r/n: i will always return the reviews too |
| Spellbound Mist 2006-09-05 ch 1,  | abuse:) love me forever? sounds good! good like your poem there! -thumbs up- |
| Skiv 2006-08-29 ch 1, | abuseDude, this is pretty good, good concept and all. I like the end. ~`Skiv |
| Kimiko's Cousin 2006-08-20 ch 1, | abuseWow...I 100% fell in love with the last lines; "i'm beautiful...If you can survive the thorns" |
| Morwain 2006-04-26 ch 1, | abusewow this was really good shorter than the other ones of yours i've read but but still good |
| The Blazing Eclipse 2005-12-21 ch 1, | abuseuh...conflicting lines huh?...interesting...like it...really short, but whatever, i think i'm the one with the 300 word minimums usually... |
| Siph Speigel 2005-12-14 ch 1, | abuseThis one is actually pretty nice, I like the simplicity of it, and the diction is nice. Well assembled. |
| happypills03 2005-11-25 ch 1, | abusewow.. great!! it's really great!! |
| til-iburnout aka Amanda Hel... 2005-11-04 ch 1, | abuseI love it. We have to look past what we first see. |
| Sacred-Phoenix-Nephthys 2005-11-04 ch 1, | abuseWot an awesome poem...the rythym was so good i went through it again and read it aloud, it was so so good, well done^-^ Thanks 4 mi reviews^_^ |
| Harmony the Author 2005-11-03 ch 1, | abusei'm loving the short lines! really leaves an impression music to my ears, darling=] |
| undepressed-one44 2005-11-02 ch 1, | abuseWhoah, short but totally amazing... -freak from the corner |
| mizu no kokoro 2005-10-25 ch 1, | abusepretty^^ the feelings flow~ good work keep writing! |
| ronshaberry 2005-10-25 ch 1, | abuseAh... Interesting line separationg thingies (>) Where was I? Oh yes. Pretty good rhyming, I love the title by the way, good flow. Oh, and the last two lines really grabbed me. w00t. |
| Aslan Israel 2005-10-25 ch 1, | abuseWow. Just brilliant. I'm speechless... Definatly a fav. |