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| llama 2006-10-22 ch 20, anon. | abusegood chapter! i thought you'd given up on the story, i was very worried!! im glad its still going :) update soon please |
| Alexis LePlume 2006-10-11 ch 20, | abuseYes, an organ. xD I suppose he's off to wherever Adrillian is being kept. Well, I can't help but thinking that that he's going off to meet someone that can be considered as 'villainous' for some favor or other. ^^' Alexis |
| SingingStormWind 2006-10-10 ch 20, | abuseYay! A new chapter... the waiting just makes them all the more special...I can't wait for the next one... oh, and by the way, as it turns out, i can't be weaned from this story. I'm pretty sure it's physically impossible |
| Ck90 2006-10-10 ch 20, | abuseUm? I forgot all my questions but i trust that they were answered. And I bet he's of to see the wizard? Umm It was a long wait, but hey it was worth it. I realy thank you that she i out of the hell hole! Update soon! Oh and thanks for the compliment! |
| dodgermommy 2006-10-10 ch 20, anon. | abuseI'm thinking Adrillian had a date with Ex! Good Chapter! |
| sofiya05 2006-10-10 ch 20, | abusehey, oh she's bk...y d hell did he leave her on her own adrillian could be coming back anytym now! aw alec can't call him daddy...i think thats sad... i'm guessing hes gone to beat the crap outta adrian huh? anyways update soon. Sofi |
| AngelxNaomi 2006-10-10 ch 20, | abuseGah! You evil evil person! I want to know where Liam is off to! Is he going to go pound Adrillian's face in? Hehe, I'd like to see...er... read that >:D Love the chapter and I'm glad you didn't leave it hanging! *hugs* Ya better update sooner than last time XD |
| Firespirit44 2006-10-10 ch 20, | abuseThere I was, rejoicing that Ex had managed to find Trinity, joyful that Alec was getting better, and ecstatic that Ex had (finally) proposed to Trinity. Yup. Life was good. Just..I was wondering. How come it wasn't the epilogue? And then I read the last sentence: 'The simple spell in place, he climbed from the bed and ran a fingertip along her cheek. “You’ll forgive me, my love. But I simply must do this.” She was sound asleep as he disappeared.' WHAT IS THIS. He simply COULDN'T be content with a "And they lived happily ever after. The End." COULD HE?? Jeez. =.= He's probably off to hunt Adrillian down and that spell was probably to restrain Trinity from following him or something. Wasn't it? GAHH. BAD EX. Make sure you give him tons and tons of trouble when you grow up, Alec. I'm all for it! XP Now don't you go disappear like Ex..stay here and update so I can find out what happens and rant on more about that!! |
| AngelxNaomi 2006-08-15 ch 19, | abuseK, I'm mad at fictionpress now. They didn't send me an e-mail when you updated T^T Aside from that, OMM that was a sad chapter o.o Poor Liam. To have a dream like that... Must have been tramatizing to remember what's back in reality. I can't wait for the next chapter! Liam can finally start looking for Trinity again! Yay! *cheers* |
| FaithMiller 2006-08-09 ch 19, | abuseYou leave me with that!?!?!? What the hell??!?!? okay... I need more now!...Soon...How soon? |
| llama 2006-07-30 ch 19, anon. | abusei love love this story!! update soon please! |
| Elidhu 2006-07-25 ch 19, | abuseThat is a brilliant chapter and hes one step closer to finding her which might not be very close but is still closer than he was before. XBethX |
| SingingStormWind 2006-07-24 ch 19, | abuseWoot! Go Ex! Enjoy this review! Update fast! I love this story! (just when i thought i had been weened from my addiction, you draw me back in with another chapter) |
| grumpirah 2006-07-24 ch 19, anon. | abusei was getting to confused in the beginning when ex was describing the birth. it had me thinking i forgot to read something. made me happy when i realized he was dreaming. |
| dodgermommy 2006-07-24 ch 19, anon. | abuse"Ex likes reviews. And a happy Ex promotes faster writing"Don't tell me I need to submit multiple reviews under false names again just to make EX happy! Cause I will darn it! Good, but short chapter. I think that Adrillian isn't going to make it out alive...and if he does then he won't be in one piece anymore! |