I like it. It has a good flow to it. Thank you for reviewing my poem and I'm glad you liked it.

Sincerely,

the Stranger in the moonlight.

Aw... That was so nice, Britty! Great job!

Keep yer hopes up, things will turn out shiny in the end. The poem is excellent. Can't find much to complain about. Though, the hid in the second to last stanza... Is it on purpose, or did you mean hide? Regardless, lovely job.

`Ghosteyes