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| perpetual questions 2007-05-14 ch 1,  | abuseThat's right, bash the math! Great poem. |
| Sting Ferdinand 2006-06-01 ch 1, | abuseSo true. I'm actually pretty angry with math in general right now, seeing as though I could have been first in my class if I hadn't gotten a C on my precalc final. I'm sure this echoes the thoughts of 99% of teenagers. Good material; I like how the second stanza isn't just saying "what am i gonna use this for." You phrased it differently. :P |
| ilovetheopera 2006-04-15 ch 1, | abuseat least youre better at maths than i am yeah. i suck. big time. anyway, i dont know what quadratics are as well, so no need to worry. although i dont much like poems that rhyme, this one is cute. sadly, ive got nothing better to say about it. yes, im biased towards he(/she) that rhymes. and yes, i misspelt it deliberately. it was sort of an inspiration towards 'hyper' and 'muse'. if that makes sense. i cant wait to get our sa back. i think i failed. perhaps i should stick to death/divorce from now on. |
| Exquisitely 2006-03-03 ch 1, | abuseAhh fik! So funny okay! (: |
| xDistortedReALiTyx 2006-02-23 ch 1, | abuse*laughing* Oh how I hate algebra...math in general really...I loved this, it's just truly awsome. Keep it up.--pammy-x3 |
| Lauren Wolfe 2006-02-20 ch 1, | abuseHah! Got nothing to say, as I like analytic stuff more than the memorizing bits...interesting questions, though. Makes me think twice ;) Great work! ^^ |
| Raiya Masroor 2006-02-07 ch 1, | abusecool...specially the second stanza ..it would have been much better if it had been much longer though |
| stellaz 2006-02-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseAH! fik! i liked this one! it is so... typical of you, considering that you really hate maths and algebra! you said that you didnt like this poem but i think that because you really meant what you wrote and it is very... personal, so you managed to write a very perfect piece! |
| Manuel Fajar 2005-12-09 ch 1, | abuseMathematics is something to ponder, Though sometimes it drives our mind asunder, There's no booming thunder to its pleasure, It's a feast eaten with leisured measure,-- All of those symbols that in mind we sow, Eventually into equations grow, Like a team of athletes in a crew shell, Each one pulling to a rhythm crucial,-- You could say it's synchronized aquatics, When you delve deeply into quadratics, Sometimes it gives us various answers, Like the choices downloading from napster's,-- But really, it is something old, yet new, Can drive us to a tizzy makes us blue, Though never like a lawyer that will sue,-- It can leave us in puzzlement quite true. (p.s. thank you for your comments. m) |
| Letty Merrylegs 2005-10-21 ch 1, | abuseLol, I hate maths! This is a grate poem |
| laughter at the funeral 2005-10-20 ch 1, | abuselol, i do ask myself the questions you stated...you did a very good job...oh and pls, if you have the time, pls do review some of my poems...thanks... truly yours... |
| Faithless Juliet 2005-10-20 ch 1, | abuseI hated Algebra in school; we had to do all of ours on Computer Screens which made it all the worse for me. Great poem, I loved it, keep up the good work. Much love,Juliet. |