i think we have this I rate your stuff and you rate mine because I rated yours, so I rate yours 'cause you rated mine, and so on. Did that make any sense? No, I didn't think , I love this poem. I totally know how you feel, and feel this way too

Hey thanks for reviewing :) Anyway, I love this poem and what it stands for. I can totally relate to it. But perhaps here are some suggestions that I found stopped the flow a little...

"No matter how much I want it gone, it still lingers here with me.

Perhaps it may be better if it's "No matter how much I want it gone, it still lingers." ?

yeah but other from those parts, I LOVED THE ENDING! You rock! Keep on writing !

Oh wow. O.O that was deep very deep. I wish I could write like that. I can only wish you luck through your journey of poetry. You know, you would make an awesome poet.

Beautiful poem and brilliantly written. Even after everyone has left us we will still have our words wont we?

ANNA

Hey Rira-chan! I really liked it. _ Great job!

Hey, cheer up! if this is a poem about yourself...but it's really good. I like the way you show how you're trying to let your feelings out. Was this actually meant for the person you write about?

Keep writing!-K

"Now I feel nothing can take the pain away.

No matter how much I want it gone, it still lingers here with me.

This feeling is so unreal."

Ah, that broken sorrowful feeling that makes the anger boil from within. So very nicely written. I hope to see more of your work. _