|Reviews for Untitled|
| All Alone With Her Thoughts 8/20/06 . chapter 1
i think we have this I rate your stuff and you rate mine because I rated yours, so I rate yours 'cause you rated mine, and so on. Did that make any sense? No, I didn't think , I love this poem. I totally know how you feel, and feel this way too
| jointedlegs 8/18/06 . chapter 1
Hey thanks for reviewing :) Anyway, I love this poem and what it stands for. I can totally relate to it. But perhaps here are some suggestions that I found stopped the flow a little...
"No matter how much I want it gone, it still lingers here with me.
Perhaps it may be better if it's "No matter how much I want it gone, it still lingers." ?
yeah but other from those parts, I LOVED THE ENDING! You rock! Keep on writing !
| vixenia 10/25/05 . chapter 1
Oh wow. O.O that was deep very deep. I wish I could write like that. I can only wish you luck through your journey of poetry. You know, you would make an awesome poet.
| Anna178 10/21/05 . chapter 1
Beautiful poem and brilliantly written. Even after everyone has left us we will still have our words wont we?
| Eli-chan 10/20/05 . chapter 1
Hey Rira-chan! I really liked it. _ Great job!
| AngelK 10/20/05 . chapter 1
Hey, cheer up! if this is a poem about yourself...but it's really good. I like the way you show how you're trying to let your feelings out. Was this actually meant for the person you write about?
| Lipstick Stained Massacre 10/20/05 . chapter 1
"Now I feel nothing can take the pain away.
No matter how much I want it gone, it still lingers here with me.
This feeling is so unreal."
Ah, that broken sorrowful feeling that makes the anger boil from within. So very nicely written. I hope to see more of your work. _