Well, I don't know what to think of that. It seems really random. I don't know if I like it that much. I'm sorry. I usually like your stuff a lot.

beautiful.. I love the first stanzas

Once again, great rhythm. And good . . . imagery? I don't feel that "happy" emotion you talk about in the summary, though. I don't really feel any emotion in this piece.

Simple and sweet. Brava!

wow, i like the imagry. the rhyme and flow was good too. i liked the last stanza "broken chains/of tensing string/real smiles/and fairy wings" thats really pretty. good job and KW and thanks for the review!

~davida

This is one of the best rhyming poems i've ever read on this site. I love the imagery you've used here. Living proof, that not all good poetry is written when depressed. Going on my favs.

WOW.this rhyming is amazing-it flows so beautifully.Delicious.It'd be a crime if I didn't add it to my faves-honestly,this is just...wow...

E.Ebony

coolness. like the way the lines tie in together well done.

live on the edge..!@#$%