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OneLastEndeavor 2005-11-08 ch 1,	abuseInteresting poem about not being able to write. It has a truthful basis of reality, that makes it quite likable. My favorite lines: "Ramblings of an angry teenWho has lost his loveHis writing" Those, to me, stood out and established the essence of the poem once and for all. Good job! P.S. Regarding my poem, "Equilibrium", I decided on Four because during the time I was writing it, there were four dominant figures in my life trying to control me... It let my anger out. But you're right, it could be any number. Four just has a special, personal significance, that's all. winks
Lakoria 2005-11-03 ch 1,	abuseThat's deep and oh so true. I can't tell you how many times I've had to write (for creative writting) and I can't. I can't think of any writter who has never felt that way. I loved the way you put it. Keep up the good work! God bless, Lakoria
blacktearsof*innocence 2005-11-03 ch 1,	abusevery nice. i also like the imagry in this piece. its clever. it gives it sort of a different air to it. i love the last two lines "who has lost his love/his writing" yup, i dunno what i'd do if i couldn't write out my feelings. well, i know what i could do, but i would rather use the pen and not the razor to take out my feelings of anger or sadness or confusion. well, good job and keep writing forever and always! ~davida
mizu no kokoro 2005-10-31 ch 1,	abusewell, i hope it comes back to u~~ actually, i'm sure it will, don't give up! keep writing!
nasake-suneku 2005-10-23 ch 1,	abuseCool ^_^ I liked the way you ended it... I totally understand. As a writer myself, I experience writer's block frequently. It gets so bad that I don't write for months at a time... and then, BAM, it hits me! Anyway... I like it. Great job ^_~ -Tiff M.
nanashi-04 2005-10-20 ch 1,	abuseI really like this, and can relate to it.

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