FictionPress.com - let the words flow
| FictionPress.com - let the words flow |
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| spiderfly 2006-01-20 ch 1,  | abuseI think its beautiful until the last two lines : the rhyming seems kinda forced. But good job. |
| multiples of six 2005-10-20 ch 1, | abuseAww.. I love the bit about the fairies shivering, the mental image is so cute.. =) |