OMG! this is such a powerful story. So different from anyother stories out there and the twist was so unexpected. I had to read it twice before I knew what was happening. I loved how the dialouge made the story so dramatic. This was really good! I'll look out for more of your stories!

Wow. This was so...powerful. Though I have to wonder, what was the object in his pocket? But I don't think I want to know, as that would ruin the mystery.

Keep writing!

I love the style this is written in- all the short lines and stuff. It's so dramatic. The way they met was SO cute- I love the flower thing. "But like winter... ...everything melts away" is a great line. Pure beauty. It's strange how romantic and wonderful this starts and so CREEPY it turns... the whole "He's going to kill you" was really affective. And the ending... wow, it the flashbacks were crazy. And the end... the no Sarah's and the last line... wow, this is just amazing. It's really, really good and I really enjoyed reading it. How creepy, though... wow, anyway, great work, keep writing!

Wow. That's all I can say.Wow.This is an amazing story, and since I'm ever-so emotional, I cried. This is an AMAZING story.-Michelle

this is really good.

Awesome. Really, really, REALLY awesome!

This is really good. Really well written and explained well. And the ending is such a twist. Keep it up!

Ooh... awesome ending.. I love the short sentences/paragraphs, and how the boyfriend never has a name.. I know how hard it is to write a story without naming a character but it was so unforced I didn't even realize it until near the end. And the bit with the flowers was great. Keep up the good work. =)

wow... you really have to read it a couple times before it sinks in