Hmm this one is my favorite, your emoish one. perhaps I am an emo! oh no. I am not, I hate fashion. your other ones seem unfinished is that because your the procrastinator? happy songs really seem quite meaningless really, this one is quite deep. I prefer to have both happy and sad in songs, this one is a bit like that. I rarely make sense, I make more sense in rhyme than at any other time, hehe.

Very nice...I enjoyed it. Good job. Keep it up! Thanks for the review by the way...*smiles*

wow. very powerful. I love it! this one really makes you think. write on!

sweetness...very nicely done indeed

Hi! I really loved your poem. I'm also not good at reviews.