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| InMemoryofPhil 2005-10-20 ch 1,  | abuseI, for one, loved it. It's nice to read about something on such a happy subject, especially in my revent depression. I didn't see anything to pick apart, which is amazing because I'm one of the pickiest freaks on the planet when it comes to writing. Others may not agree, but I think it's perfect. It flows very nicely. ~Ty |
| Hazeleyed Everglades 2005-10-20 ch 1, | abuseAww... made me smile. ^_^ It sounds like a traditional x-mas carol. Good job! Kind of out of season, but that doesn't matter. I still like it. ^_^ |
| Abortive Measures 2005-10-20 ch 1, | abuseBit early, don't you think?! |