it's been like 9 months since I've entered FP and reviewed so don't expect a great review XD.i found the poem generally good, basic, and think that it could have a bit more similies or metaphoric phrases : )apart from that, I liked the last two lines. It was a good way to end it !take care.bye!

Aww... I notice you have a pattern in these poems of hoping that the same thing won't happen with this time as the last... I noticed in particular the line that went "Don’t go away anytime soon." From my experience, at least, this isn't the best request, if you know what I mean. The actual length of relationships generally decides the amount of pain after break-ups, so I guess what I would feel personally is to say "Don't stick around only to leave me in pain, give me a choice." Don't change the poem, though, I was just remarking on our difference of feeling... ~_^