Oh, very nice. I really liked the lines "Do you remember all those pretty letters I wrote you?" and "Foolish words and a foolish boy, Make such a nice pair, Sitting alone, Without me there." Great emotions and great message. You should write poetry more often- you're really good at it! Oh, and I haven't forgotten your stories, but school is keeping me really busy and I haven't had time to read them. But as soon as I get a spare moment, I will get back to them, I promise! Great work, keep writing!