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| Steppenwoelfin 2005-11-14 ch 1, | abuseThe format of the poem is great...It has a spiral pattern, and an increasingly breathless, suffocating air as it proceeds downwards. |
| simpleplan13 2005-10-28 ch 1, | abuseI liek the whole chemicals thing and the ending.. awesome job |
| Muggins 2005-10-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseOoh, that last line is creepy (in a good way). This poem kinda reminded me of that X-Men: Evolution episode where Rogue's own powers became much too overwhelming, and were tearing her apart from the inside, as all the personalities and powers she ever absorbed were fighting to take over. Well done, kiddo! |
| SHadow Wisher 2005-10-21 ch 1, | abusei have read this, and it took my breath away. i like how it is written and how it is worded. if i were you, i'd do some more like this Shadow |