OMGSH. You have no idea how into this I am and I see that you're not updating and it breaks my heart that I won't get to see what happens in the end! I'm crying right now! =(
Maybe you're stuck but God, this is the craziest cliffie in the world.
We don't know Trey's secret. We don't know what she'll do about Kyle's funeral. We don't know if she and Kathy will ever makeup. We don't know if she'll finally get with Jarek.
There's just SO MUCH we don't know!
I'll put this on alert in hopes that you'll update one day. Until then... I don't even know HOW MY LIFE CAN GO ON.
...But I'll try. =)

i am quite upset with you.
your last update was in 2007!


04-19-07





over two years later.
dissapointed!

Dude! Way to leave with a cliff-hanger! Please update!

This reminds me of Twilight. (^_^) And you put it out at the same time the first Twilight book was put out.

Firstly I just wanted to say how much I truly enjoy reading your stories, they are incredibly fun to read. And I personally love this story, I know you think it's terrible, but we are our own worst critics. I hope you decide to do something with with story sometime soon. Thanks for the stories, keep writing!

-Jen

P.S. LOVE Like Father, Like Son

Your story is so good and so sad at the same time. Im trying not to cry right now. I hope things get better for Caya and everyone. She;s gettin close to have a break down.

You don't even know how awesomely great this story is. I am crying right now. Honestly. Please update quickly!

I really love this story. I read all during my "study sessions" hehehe.
Jarek is an amazing character, I really like him becauase he's so well create. You're a genious!
So, update soon or... I'll send a bunch of dementors looking for you! Or, better, a bunch of hungry vampires!
Love!
XOXO
MAG

i love this story and you have to update
please
and it seems i'm not the only one too.
i wonder what the secret is, who he's related to?
this is a good story :)

i am officially addicted to YAMA.When will Caya and Jarek actually get some action? I'm dying to know.I know they're destined to fall in love with each other.please please please let it be soon.if you have pity on my soul, you'd actually update.i NEED a new chapter.lmao
tc
xoxo

I could gush on for hours and fill pages and pages about how much i love your writing and your stories. They fill me with countless emotions, make me laugh, cry, want to punch whoever's lights out and so on. Seriously, I'm really impressed :P despite how picky I am about what i read ^^;

Keep writing as wonderfully as ever and please update... preferably in your own time >> but quickly so i can read more @_@ no pressure whatsoever >3>

so are trey and jarek cousins or something? Crazy. Anyways, i love the story as always and can't wait for you to update next

UPDATE!

W.O.W. You really know how to tell a story. Your characters all have depth to them, which is something one hardly ever sees on FictionPress any more (or maybe I'm just not looking).

I really hate to give you criticism since I'm reviewing this for the first time (on chapter eleven, no less), but it seems as if going out of your way to make things dramatic for Caya. It may be just me, but I kind of get the feeling that all this stuff is maybe just a little exaggerated. I realize that without drama, there would be no plot; however, it seems like you're focusing on making sure the drama is intense enough for the story rather than moving the plot line along.

Now, I really hate to say that, because she just took reconciliatory steps with Kathy, she became closer to Cuyler, and she's about to find out the 'bad blood' between Jarek and Trey, but I still get the feeling that I've been reading through a bunch of fillers.

Please don't take offense to this. Maybe there's something that I'm not catching. I don't mean to insult you or your story, but when something is bugging me, I have to get it out of my system. This is still a good story, with an interesting plotline and a humorous narrator. I'm impressed with how much she's able to handle. :)

iT IS OBVIOUS tREY AND Jared are lyk releated. I totally hate evryone except Caya and Curyer. They are good. Evryone else sucks lyk shit.