It's... decent. Not great; not bad. Flow is a little off...

Ah, I like this one. I now have the feeling to go re-read one of my Patricia Cornwell books, I don't really know why...Well I think that they rhyming was pretty good. My favorite lines were "So catch me if you can because it's already too late. It was over even before it began there's just no stopping fate. Good Job

Megan (itsonlyme07)