Favorite line: "Hot like fire, burn like ice." I just love that contrast, and even though ice doesn't literally burn, you can think of the sensation as burning, and it works. I like this poem. Keep writing! :)

I wrote a rather morbid valentines day poem, though it doesn't resemble this in the slightest. First of all it sucked, and this doesn't. I like how you used the idea in this poem, its interesting and gets the point across powerfully.

ANNA

your poem was great. i loved the imagery. the only thing i would fix would be the small mistakes in the fift stanza, but otherwise, its very good.

beautiful!! loved it!

This was an excellent piece. When I read the summary I knew it would be (as tacky as that may sound). I loved this, it was just excellent, a fantastic read.

Harlequin~Please fix me...