Wow.. I really enjoy reading your poetry. You're such a good writer. Keep up the good work!

Whoa... this hits close to home... Although it has a slightly different meaning for me...

Hmm... I didn't think it was about a love/hate relationship. I thought it was more about someone breaking your heart (it kills you). Well, it means something different to everyone.

Either way, very good poem. Very powerful!

I like the imagry of this; the intensity, the concept of "murdering each other" and liking it. Its very sexual.Keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.