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| uniqueindividual 2008-08-01 ch 6,  | abuseWoah! It is cute but wrong! I am conflicted with this story line. |
| Sad Reader 2008-03-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseIt's been well over a year since there was an update on here! =( I've had this bookmarked since the Tell a Little Tale chapter came out. Won't you please update again? =) Just once? |
| Haru 2008-02-14 ch 6, anon. | abuseOh my this is such a cute story! I love Lamb so much! Please update soon. |
| Midnights Scream 2007-02-23 ch 6, | abuseI've read this story before, but apparently haven't reviewed. I like it though! the idea is unique and i like how everything's playing out. :) |
| shadowofthekryptonite 2007-02-18 ch 1, | abuseI love you! great, really great! |
| dolly-dear 2006-11-19 ch 6, | abuseHaha, I love it. Amazing. I can't wait to read more, so you'd better update! |
| Beautiful Rendition 2006-09-08 ch 1, | abusethis looks like its going to be really good. can wait to read more |
| Chocolate Ninj4 2006-09-03 ch 6, | abuseIt wasn't nearly as bad as you think. Granted, it wasn't the most interesting chapter, but it was necessary for the development of the story, and at least it was concise. In this case, short is good. And it did have some character development and explained things. And now that all that is out of the way, I'm sure the next chapter(s) will be fantastic! ^_^ P.S. Thanks to Joshua Christopher (XD, I just realised those initials are JC--that's hilarious for him), I have been exposed to the Dresden Dolls. |
| UnfortunateSoul 2006-06-25 ch 6, | abuse*Coils around the eye-liner boy* How nice. It took me how damn long to get back in here- and look, my eyeliner boy is actually here! I love you! So after catching up on two chapters I'm happy to say I'm pleased! *dances* Great work, loved the chapters.I'll catch back up when I'm online again. -Unfortunate Soul,Sky |
| Joshua Christopher 2006-06-06 ch 6, | abuseMaxwell, my dear dear friend! It's been so long! I'm so sorry I haven't talked to you in awhile. There was a certain...erm...event which scared me into never returning to FP again, and is why my name changed and why my especially dirty stories were all removed. But I can't not come back here. There's too many people for me to miss! I'm sorry, I didn't actually read this story even though I'm reviewing. I just wanted to contact you in a way I knew you'd get the message from. I hope you don't hate me forever for neglecting you. =P I'm going to read your Mimi's Cafe stuff, I promise that I am! See, I love writing and all. But I have trouble reading, like getting into a story. I can get into short-chaptered stories easier, but they're usually not as good. When I have the time to read stories with decentsized chapters, I usually love them better. I've just been so busy lately... I'm sorry for rambling and taking up a review for nothing story-related. I just want you to know that I love and miss you. xD Talk to you soon, Doll. |
| Gaki Toki 2006-06-03 ch 6, | abuseHAHA! I get it now. That's a relief and I like Lamb...he's funny. Ren: *is groping Thad* M...sexy... Jason: Oh my God, I think this story is just a little weird...and I hope I don't have to be a guest star...please? Ren: MAKE HIM A GUEST STAR! *laughs insanely* Thad: I think it would be fun! Besides...when you guys are as old as you are I'm pretty young! Hey...I'm like, seventeen when you guys are...well...hey, I dunno, but that doesn't matter. All that matters is that I want Ren to touch me more...heh, heh... Ren: No problem babe! *starts to take off Thad's clothes* Jason: I'm leaving. This was an enlightening chapter M&M, I liked it. Thad: *moans* Jason: *bristles* Ugh... *leaves* I didn't think your chappie was as bad as you made it sound. I like this whole idea, you just have to get to writing more of it! BEFORE I FORGET ABOUT IT! AH! How 'bout before I get to college? Haha...don' worry, that's years from now. ~Gaki |
| Destiny852 2006-05-30 ch 6, | abuseOH.MY.GOD. I LOVE YOU. I LOVE TRAVIS/AMBER. I LOVE ALL YOUR CHARACTERS! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE !obnoxious amount of exclamation point later...YOU ROCK! |
| asdf 2006-05-23 ch 6, anon. | abusewhy exactly is travis a criminal? it was never mentioned...he's more like a victim in this case (like kidnapped, illegally sold, etc). |
| chibi suppi 2006-05-23 ch 6, | abuseMy poor little sheep herder! You turned him into a brothel boy! *cuddles lamb* You've scarred him! (more so than Ram.) >< Oh well... he was rather easy... so I suppose it works lol. Hell he might even enjoy a few returning customers... but could someone buy a pet? >> ~suppi |
| Saiwa 2006-05-19 ch 6, | abuseThis is really good but you switched from past to present tense a bit. Im suprised I understood it all in one read yay me! update soon |