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nevermore, the silent cry
2005-10-27
ch 1,
abuseawesome. pictures and written word and all that captures moments for us to hold forever. or not. love the idea of time, i wish i could write about this the way you do. teehee. but alas, don't have such lovely ideas. this is gorgeous though. awesome.
jenymca
2005-10-22
ch 1,
abuseThat is an excellent poem. It really...captures emotion...I...wow.
Brackenthyme
2005-10-21
ch 1, anon.
abuseI really like the rythm of this song. And the word choice. Thank you for writing.
Creepy McSteezerson
2005-10-21
ch 1,
abusei think the last line in parenthesis really ends the poem nicely. its hard to make out the point of the poem, but i enjoy poems that leave the reader to create their own interpretation. good work, keep writing :)
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