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| nevermore, the silent cry 2005-10-27 ch 1, | abuseawesome. pictures and written word and all that captures moments for us to hold forever. or not. love the idea of time, i wish i could write about this the way you do. teehee. but alas, don't have such lovely ideas. this is gorgeous though. awesome. |
| jenymca 2005-10-22 ch 1, | abuseThat is an excellent poem. It really...captures emotion...I...wow. |
| Brackenthyme 2005-10-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseI really like the rythm of this song. And the word choice. Thank you for writing. |
| Creepy McSteezerson 2005-10-21 ch 1, | abusei think the last line in parenthesis really ends the poem nicely. its hard to make out the point of the poem, but i enjoy poems that leave the reader to create their own interpretation. good work, keep writing :) |