Interesting start, maybe fix some of the spelling errors, but hey, no ones perfect!! keep it up.

Aw. I like it. Ishki and Mye are too cute, but I can't wait to see how the story progresses. I'll be sure to check you out when your next chapter goes up, so don't keep me waiting too long, okay? ^__~ Heh. Nice job with this one.

Lauren

I liked it even better than the prologue. Continue!

An interesting prologue. Personally, it reminded me of mine, being kinda random and weird. I'll continue to read. R&R my stories, if have the time or will.

Oh, I like this story, plix write more. And it's a bad idea to misspell words in your summary, seeing as how that's what people first see when they look at your story. Bad spelling is something of a turnoff because it's boring to read when there's like a couple hundred misspellings in every chapter. Steal, I think ou mean, not steel. But the story seems great, other than those minor annoyances! Whee, fun to read! Baibai now.

hmm...I'm interested very much so. our style is diffent but all is good and if u want a writing buddy to help you I've had much exoerance in this bissness...good luckand good job.

Thats interesting. Not much to go on but it seems like something I could sit and read if it was whole. I'm hooked I guess. It seems to happen fast and easily. Update soon!

Wow, wonderful story line. Love the epilogue, so mysterious. I wonder what kind of powers Mye and Nataku have. Continue soon.

I like the story so far. I'm interested in finding out where the stories headed.

Interesting. But lots of spelling errors. Other than that, good! :D