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| Odds Are Against Us 2007-01-01 ch 2, anon. | abuseInteresting start, maybe fix some of the spelling errors, but hey, no ones perfect!! keep it up. |
| Twisted Deceptions 2006-02-05 ch 2,  | abuseAw. I like it. Ishki and Mye are too cute, but I can't wait to see how the story progresses. I'll be sure to check you out when your next chapter goes up, so don't keep me waiting too long, okay? ^__~ Heh. Nice job with this one. Lauren |
| Heatless Flame 2006-01-15 ch 2, | abuseI liked it even better than the prologue. Continue! |
| Heatless Flame 2006-01-15 ch 1, | abuseAn interesting prologue. Personally, it reminded me of mine, being kinda random and weird. I'll continue to read. R&R my stories, if have the time or will. |
| Proudly Modest 2005-11-26 ch 2, | abuseOh, I like this story, plix write more. And it's a bad idea to misspell words in your summary, seeing as how that's what people first see when they look at your story. Bad spelling is something of a turnoff because it's boring to read when there's like a couple hundred misspellings in every chapter. Steal, I think ou mean, not steel. But the story seems great, other than those minor annoyances! Whee, fun to read! Baibai now. |
| Dave Waznick 2005-10-27 ch 2, | abusehmm...I'm interested very much so. our style is diffent but all is good and if u want a writing buddy to help you I've had much exoerance in this bissness...good luckand good job. |
| MiidKniight 2005-10-27 ch 2, | abuseThats interesting. Not much to go on but it seems like something I could sit and read if it was whole. I'm hooked I guess. It seems to happen fast and easily. Update soon! |
| Jaeiyola 2005-10-22 ch 2, | abuseWow, wonderful story line. Love the epilogue, so mysterious. I wonder what kind of powers Mye and Nataku have. Continue soon. |
| My OnlY SuNshInE 2005-10-21 ch 2, | abuseI like the story so far. I'm interested in finding out where the stories headed. |
| Emmelyn Cindy Mah 2005-10-21 ch 1, | abuseInteresting. But lots of spelling errors. Other than that, good! :D |