Hey, Neko! Jeez, how long has it been since I've been here...?Anyway, you've made some great improvements, babe! Everything is much clearer. By the way, I really liked the repetition of "Not since July, not since June..." You really communicate a very clear emotion in this piece. Excellent work!~Oni

'Aiya Neko-chan! ^_^ I really liked this piece when it was submitted to Lodestar... such unique descriptions... and very strange, fresh, gray-depressing type of beauty. There is a good strong emotion throughout, hee! It's very sad, though. I'm sorry about your neighbor. *hug* I especially like "Who was she? The color of sunrise". :)