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Gentle. Edge. 2008-10-02 ch 25,	abuseWow, what a twist. Lol. I seriously would never have thought of this story or anything like it. You're really creative. The ending was kinda confusing for me since the setting and what Siobhan did wasn't very visual (is that the right word? o.o) for me. Anyways, awesome story; I really liked it :D
Gentle. Edge. 2008-10-02 ch 21,	abuseI knew it! Lol. After the first time you said his father was an important person, I pretty much knew Jason was somehow related to the headmaster. :D
rae of light 2008-10-02 ch 26,	abuseSo, it has taken me a day to read this, and frankly I am really glad I read it. I love horror. [: And the fact your writing is somewhat like Hate To Hope/Bleeding Air. I feel good that I knew most of the things before they came. If I didn't I would probably still be hitting myself. I blame reading to many horror, and just being able to catch on. But it was amazing. Yeah, some things were unclear, but it was a very nice plot. I figured Jason would be alive, I mean, why on earth would you want to kill Jason? After all of it, I am still proud to say I love Jason. Muahaha. Something about being turned on by psycho boys...shrug But yeah, um, I would really like to see a sequel if you ever have an awesome idea too it. Ah-mazing story. Definately a lot better than most.
Gentle. Edge. 2008-09-25 ch 1,	abuseIt seems interesting and I like Siobhan's name :D
BluePillow75 2008-09-20 ch 25,	abuseI had no idea Jason was a bad guy! Guess I'm just as easy to maniupulate as Shioban... I was so taken of guard when he hit her after she found the notes, I was all like " AHA! Inkara sent them by e-mail to the headmaster and Jason somehow got them!" I feel bright... Anywublly! Can't Shioban and Jason in some crazy and probobly wierd way get together still? I felt SO sorry for her when she was like " I miss him" por girl... crying AND! how do you make that up? that a seemly nice guy like jason is a total psykopath? Ps. yes, I understand that Jason was very morbid and wanted to kill her, but maybe deep down he actually loved her, maybe? huh,huh?!
I.Heart.Shi 2008-09-16 ch 4, anon.	abuseI think that if you rewrite this, you should give her a backbone, shes MUCH too weak, an its painful to read. I mean this in a constructive way, it like, you can't get lost in her character because you find yourself asking why the hell she's groveling to everyone of her peers, why is SHE being a sheep, why does she think she NEEDS these people if they're going to act petty. I find myself not liking her at all, and I'm supposed to, I don't even sympathize with her, she' annoying.
Demeterr 2008-09-13 ch 26,	abuseWow. Such a great story. Creepy and all - the story I mean. But it's great.
Kasey's Twilight 2008-08-25 ch 25,	abuseThat made me cry...I loved Jason, that stupid crazy jerk. I really loved the story, of course I didn't want him to be crazy and evil, but you made it work...I'm still sad. :(
Kasey's Twilight 2008-08-24 ch 1,	abuseI really enjoy your use of adjectives; your writing is absolutely beautiful. I really enjot the story as far as I have gotten so far. You are a really talented writer. Keep up the good work! :) On to the not so good stuff : "She was sat" is not correct grammar, she was sitting would make more sense. "It was slid open after a few moments, gently" - I'm not sure what it is, but it was slid doesn't sound correct. It doesn't flow nearly as well as much of your writing does. " the picture from earlier on still visible in my mind" - on is not neccesary for this sentence; it sounds prettier without it.
l'heautontimoroumenos 2008-08-20 ch 26,	abuseThis is most absolutely the greatest story ever. You have to write a sequel.starts looking menacing like french people know how to Thou shall write a sequel or I shall decapitate you with a rusted spoon - which is very painful, I can assure you. Oh, and, does Celine have to be dead? I mean nobody foud her body, so she could just have ran away, couldn't she? Wouldn't that make a great sequel? please note the utterly moronic hope
D. L. Cross 2008-08-17 ch 25,	abuseJason is so creepily freaky.
McShortShort 2008-07-27 ch 26,	abusedun dun dun well if there is to be a sequel, which i hope there is, will jason still be trying to get his catharsis or whatever?
Mystery girl90 2008-05-14 ch 26,	abuseokay i love the story well not really super love sorry but you have a nice story and yes i like horro well hope you make a sequel cause i'll be waiting:P
TCATH57 2008-04-26 ch 25,	abuseAt the beginning of this story you almost think "this is gonna be another plain old boring fic..." but then you see the rating and Horror/Angst then your curious that what drew me to your fic. I really liked it though your a good writer and the torch/flashlight thing had me wondering at first (youcrazzyypeoplewholivewhereveryoulive) I like how you ended it you ended it so perfectly that you don't need a sequal. (butifyouwantoneiwouldn'tbeopposed)
Layla the fiend 2008-04-07 ch 16,	abuseJason scares me and ** me off at the same time.

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