OMG, I can't believe how much I can relate to this. I've always been a bit of a tomboy and REFUSED to wear makeup. When my cousin finally talked me into a makeover, I changed. I wore makeup one day when I knew I was gonna see my crush... and he never said anything about it. Even when we were talking he never said anything... :( Wonderfully written.

Dude, this is so close to my heart. I don't remember if you're the author who wrote the short story about realizing she was a bisexual but this hits right at home- almost exactly. Everything that is writen here is something I did when I was trying to impress this girl who I was so crazy about just a year ago. The make up, the nice clothes, the constant day dreams... you need to stop popping into my head. This is so close to my heart and I can relate to it. Thanks, I'm not the only one who's trying to change physically to impress someone. :D

I did that once. He said I had something in my teeth and walked away... But that was nice. Well wrtten to.

haha cuute!

lol, sounds like something what my friend would do. P nice story, it was short & sweet; straight to the point and it's something i won't get bored reading over & over again. you made it seem like she was actually talking to the guy buh she wasn't & that was totally cool. xD it's sweet that she would do that for her crush, buh it gives me the impression that she's a stalker with an obsession. i dunno, or maybe it's just me. because if i would have read a whole story where it starts from the beginning or somewhere when she starts her crush on him, and it developed into this, i don't think that i would find her obsessed. okay, im rambling, but it's just me so don't listen to me, okay? haha, it was fantastic and it got me rapt, keep it up.

-xoxluurve

omg i can't even start explaining you how many times i've done that for a guy *sighs* but he never never notices

love*conni

i did a sort of a retelling of this on my account but from a boy's POV. i really hope you don't mind. this one just really inspired me. so yeah...

I admire this piece of poetry (or similar type of writing) because it was written perfectly, and showed how it feels to try to impress a crush. Thank you for the review, and keep writing!

Wow. You portrayed a feeling that all of us go through so well. It's amazing what we will be willing to do in order to impress someone special. Wonderful. _

YES! In the words of McDonald's bevarage cups, I'm lovin' it! I'm speechless. This isn't one of those things with bad punctuation, it isn't corny, it's perfect. I love this.

Wow... I think pretty much every girl can relate to this. That's why it's so great. I love the first paragraph the best. The ending was heartbreaking, you can just feel the longing and lonelyness... I really know how this feels. You put it perfectly. Beautiful.

aw...that was almost heartbreaking- but so easy to relate to

I can relate! Nice and to the point. I luv job.

-Rezie

I know this feeling all too well.. Lovely write. Blessed Be. Natasha x

Very good tiny details. I did this one time, too. Once. Because it is time consuming, stress making, and the ultimate let-down later.

Plus it made me want to kick his butt later.