this is definately going on my favorites

HEY AWESOME! YOU UPDATED! KEEP GOING! ITS REALLY GOOD!

What kind of a name is Sapphire? A Mary-Sue name, that's what. Seriously, give this girl some problems or insecurities or something. She's too perfect. HE'S too perfect. There seems to be no plot other than boy-meets-girl-they-fall-in-love-the-end. And that's boring. Spice it up. Give it some life. Jeez, you're going to drive people crazy if you don't. And spell check. Spell check, spell check.

THIS STORY IS GREAT! LOL! Were is the other chapters! Im dying to hear more!

I loved this; I can see a love story building. Well told, I hope that you continue with it.

Much love,Juliet.

UPDATE! SO GOOD! KEEP GOING!UPDATE PLEASE!