o this is so sad...im so sorry

Very good and it had alot of emotion. Keep up the good work.

CK

Again, wow! A LOT of emotion. I'm astounded, really.Very sad, very sad.God BlessSarah

Wow... interesting. Very gloomy, if you ask me. I don't exactly feel like laughing right now, lol.Anyway, I can see that you put a lot of emotion into this. Question: did you write this poem out of experience or is it just a story? It's convincing enough to be real.One tidbit, though. I don't believe God would have us missing those people that we loved on earth... well, sure, we'd miss them but the joy of being in heaven would overrule any sadness.

Deep, and well-detailed, I liked this; keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.