|
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| emily! 2005-10-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseoh, hey, i wanted to show you this and i just remembered! http://gravitation.rightstuf.com/ in the bottom corner, there's a thingy you can click to watch the trailer! lol! it's so cute! ^^ so, check it out! it's the coolest thing ever! |
| emily1one! 2005-10-29 ch 5, anon. | abuseah! this is so sad! ;_; *gives art a hug* poor boy! i really did like this... short and good and full of angst! angsty like miss saigon! why didn't chris just leave ellen for kim?! i mean, i like ellen just as much as the next person, but... kim was so much cooler! but, NO, they had to make her shoot herself and give away tam! ...yeah, can you tell i'm still obsessing over that? lol! ^_^' |
| emily! 2005-10-29 ch 4, anon. | abuseah! you called him 'art'! i read that and i literally screamed 'yay!' out loud! lol! arthur plays ball like i do! lol! that's how i am in gym! ^_^' oh...my...GOD! miss saigon was so good! ah! i swear, we had an AWESOME engineer! i could not stop laughing during 'american dream'! it was so good! *is wearing her five dollar miss saigon pin* so much fun! just wish i had had more money so i could've afforded the ten dollar sovenier program. >_ |
| emily *sings* one day moooo... 2005-10-23 ch 3, anon. | abuseman, this story sort of reminds me of 'the lovely bones'... have you started that yet? it's an english festival book, so you very well might have, but you might be reading them in a different order than us... hm... anyway, i definiately think you'll enjoy it, even though it is depressing as hell... oh... i should be talking about your story... hmm... i think it should be longer than five parts... i think it should be longer... maybe come together and tie up some of the loose ends in the finish... but not all of them, because i do sort of like the sense of incompletion... like, 'this story isn't over yet... because my life is still going on... it will only end with my death, and the death of all the people around me, of anyone who i had ever touched... and even then, it still won't be over...' hmm, yep, i'm rambling... there is no reason i should be this tired at 12:03 in the afternoon... but it isn't really noon until 12:10, so it's still morning... because of local noon... and yeah... i learn really random things in my astronomy class... well, anywho, i really liked this... i understand about not really being effected by the death of someone you knew... this one kid i went to school from preschool up until seventh grade died in a four-wheel accident a little while ago and i felt absolutely nothing, which made me feel bad because i knew him so long, but he was never nice to me, so it didn't really have any effect other than the barest skelleton of sympathy for the family and friends... i hope you continue this, soon, you know... it's almost local noon... |
| emily again! isn't she cool... 2005-10-23 ch 2, anon. | abusei love the name arthur... his nickname should be art... then people could go around and be all, 'hey! art! yo man, some sit over here and trade pokemon cards with us!' or something to that effect... do people still collect those things? hm... i dunno... anyway, i really liked this chapter as well! but i wanna see art's poem! ^_^ because i think i know what it's about and i want confirmation! CONFIRMATION, damn it! so, yeah... great story! one more part to go! |
| emily! 2005-10-23 ch 1, anon. | abusei like this, a little short so far, but i enjoy it. i wish you would update green painted fingernails, though! lol! i've been dying for another chapter! "my sister pam, she likes ham!" *dies* that was so freaking awesome, sarah! it reminds me of jambon jean! lol! the fact that i just woke up not too long ago probably makes that funnier than it should, huh? anyways, i got two more parts of this to read, so, off, off and away! |