I really like this, but at the same time, what the hell is a blood run?

OMG! I LOVE IT! I MUST READ MORE! I can just totally feel the emotion in this story!

There is something off in this story (besides the numerous typos)and I believe that it's the fact that you're doing a lot of TELLING and not enough SHOWING. The first paragraph was a bit of an information dump, things that could have been revealed throughout the story. If you'd kept them a bit of a secret, that could have thickened the plot quite a bot because they would have been questions that had to have been answered.

Also, if he's 17 yrs old, why does he still need a babysitter?

It was fabulous1! I love vampire stories!! I have a couple of them written! Check mine out! great job! I give you a 100!Which is good!

Great chappie! ^^ I havent read, the second one yet, but I love it so far

This story has alot of promise and i cant wait to see the next chapter. Keep wrighting u may find something u like.

Thanks for reviewing my new fic. But I like it. I heard that song a few days ago, or atleast something like it. Update soon!

i liked this. It is original. needs some more description. i want to know how the others look. Maybe u cld include the descriptions at the top, sandard, so readers won;'t be lost. I like the concept u have put up, married vampires. Only males inherit? Then no female fatales?

Hey dat's so kul!! I'm really into these kinda stories and you def got my interest peaked! Am expected next chapter soon! lol, Keep Goin! IT ROX!!