| Reviews for Seizure |
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kloun mannequin 8/25/08 . chapter 1it's a nice description about yourself since it always hard to choose the words. |
Pink Plastic Fire 6/11/06 . chapter 1...wow! |
firesword 5/31/06 . chapter 1interesting I don't normally read poems, but this is good by my standards! GO NUTZ! yes i'm using your stories for my story for... advertizing! just this one, and i'm sure that no one will see this ever, except the world! oh yeah, um good, i felt like i had a sizure once, it was short though like you say, and nice poem. once again i'm not that much of a poem fan so... don't expect this all the time. |
braindead1345 5/25/06 . chapter 1Awesome, i like the one word line,very quick and sudden,like the namesake,good job! |
liquid-dreams-139 3/29/06 . chapter 1wow... is that how it really feels? cool... never knew... u shoudlnt be ashamed you know it aint ur fault that u get these seizures... stay healthy! lol stupid thing to say huh? |
The Fourth Fate 12/10/05 . chapter 1Omg wow. Ah the word seizure puts such scary images in my head. |
The Postscript 10/25/05 . chapter 1Brief...but it worked okay here. Not the best poetry I've ready...it would help if you would elaborate just a bit more instead of leaving it up to words. All in all I enjoyed reading this. Keep wriitng. |
J. N. Laerasyn 10/22/05 . chapter 1Wow... way to break convention and still be artfull about it. I love the way you did that. Good title, too. |