That was really good! Very thought provoking and intense! The ending was very well done. Emotional, with both sadness and happiness.

The only thing i would suggest is maybe have the sentneces you would like to stand out more be placed on a different line. Many of your last lines of your paragraphs could be placed on their own to emphasize their meaning.

Just a suggestion.

And, again, it was excellent. Great job!

...Whoa. Where did this come from? It's a lot to think about...

Thought-provoking story presented in the mind of a doll, an object we term to have no thoughts. I like your story! (:

Good work!