This is a good piece. I've definitely found that we are not all of the same mindset. at.all.

I know what you mean, sorry it took so long to reply to this by the way...sniff sniff...I thought you might not post anymore cause you're all busy and stuff...

But yeah. People in most chatrooms creep me out, the way I see it, they're all either old people who want sex or bored pre-teens. That's my view, though.

A few things to be improved: Well, it's not a bad poem, but it's definetly not your best. It's good, not great. I don't know why. Well, one thing is that I thought it was supposed to rhyme, and then it didn't a bit, and then it did, so I'm a wee bit confused...so. Yeah.

Otherwise, it's pretty good. The flow is nice, and the way you relate the internet people to pigs is good.

That's about it. If you find the time, could you read 'Emotionless'? It's my newest project, and after you read it, could you look at 'A State of NonExistence' because it's kind of based on it and you might like it...I don't usually do this, but I need someone to tell me what's wrong with it *starts sweating* I don't know how to improve it-Too...much...praise...can't...cope!

I love kathy! Wo!

ouch.. that was harsh, but true, and I often find myself thinking thoughts that are a lot the same... what has happened to society? god I hate people. Anyways, now on to the poem, I thouught it was wonderful, very articulate. My only rpoblem was that it rhymed on and off... but that's okay, I love it!