I like this one a lot. Flows really nicely I think :)

But the part "you're such a sneak." kind of seemed to make it stumble for a second for me personally, but what do I know about poetry!

The stanzas were really neat i thought.

I know how you feel about searching for a place to be accepted and to belong, and its all human nature to want to 'fit in' and be a part of something, but in the long run, none of it really matters and i think the sooner we accept that fact, the better off we'll be.

I really liked it. The poem is real and emotional; full of thoughts that really can go through your head at times. The layout of it is good to, makes it nicely easy to read. Great job!