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| d666lisa 2007-10-18 ch 1,  | abuseAstonishingly good :-) |
| Tytherpol 2007-06-04 ch 1, | abuseme too. it's good. |
| from beneath the bell jar 2006-01-13 ch 1, | abuseOMG! I love that! That is such a cool idea! That almost sounds like something from a movie - but very cool. This perfectly portrays my image of a hysterical girl in emotional pain - saying something like that. Anyway, love this - very cool. |
| Isi F E 2005-12-09 ch 1, anon. | abusei hate it when people say that! (and, being a psycologist in the making, i never say that to people i comfort, because it's just NOT TRUE) luv Ife |
| Katue Edmund 2005-10-22 ch 1, | abuseI love it. Your pace is good and the meaning behind the poem is unexpected and bold. You communicated the emotions behind it well, as well as the main idea. Awesome work! |
| Princess-anna57 2005-10-22 ch 1, | abuseWow, interesting concept. Good work. Write on! ~Anna~ |