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| E. A. Tetje 2006-01-16 ch 1, | abuseWow, I like how you hve used that one verse and then written this one from his perspective.~Beth |
| Luneko 2005-10-22 ch 1, | abuseReally beautiful. I like how you took that portion of Mark and ran with it. Powerful exploration. |
| Faithless Juliet 2005-10-22 ch 1, | abusePowerful narriative and detail; well done, I enjoyed it. Much love,Juliet. |
| Anastasia Who 2005-10-22 ch 1, | abuseWOW!! This is a really good poem. Great work. |