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| Squishy Lucius 2005-12-03 ch 1, | abuseAH! Thats was so cool! A little freaky, but not at all overdone. Again, you have a wonderful talent for especially horror related work. The poem felt like a nightmare, hazy and very frightening. "Suddenly a scraping scream reverberates of the walls." thats an awesome line. Greak work! KW! _Me |
| The Gobbler 2005-10-23 ch 1, | abuseAH! That was really good. I really got the feeling of how creepy the dream was. "The Shadows consume the falling figure"... that was awesome. You rock. |
| J. N. Laerasyn 2005-10-22 ch 1, | abuseYou're right... that is kind of freaky! lol. Well written, thoguh. It has a nightmarish feel, but it's not overly morbid. I like it. |