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Squishy Lucius
2005-12-03
ch 1,
abuseAH! Thats was so cool! A little freaky, but not at all overdone. Again, you have a wonderful talent for especially horror related work. The poem felt like a nightmare, hazy and very frightening. "Suddenly a scraping scream reverberates of the walls." thats an awesome line. Greak work! KW! _Me
The Gobbler
2005-10-23
ch 1,
abuseAH! That was really good. I really got the feeling of how creepy the dream was. "The Shadows consume the falling figure"... that was awesome. You rock.
J. N. Laerasyn
2005-10-22
ch 1,
abuseYou're right... that is kind of freaky! lol. Well written, thoguh. It has a nightmarish feel, but it's not overly morbid. I like it.
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